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PERMISSION SLIP



I, as Parent or Guardian, Give Permission for _________________________

(Student’s First and Last Name)



To Attend:





Glasgow church’s annual Camp Hebron youth trip!!!



Event Time: Friday, May 1, 2009 to Sunday, May 3, 2009.

(Registration and payments must be completed and turned in by March 21, 2009.)



May 1st we will first be meeting as usual in “The Loft.” At 4pm sharp. At 7pm we will depart to Camp Hebron.





1. Mode of Transportation: Glasgow’s Church Busses.



2. Students will leave from: May 1, 2009 at 7:00 p.m. and arrive at Camp Hebron at 9:30 p.m.



3. Students will return: May 3, 2009 at 10:30 p.m. at the Glasgow church parking lot.



4. Chaperones in Charge: Youth director Cindy Marx, Associate youth director Danielle Rabella, Counselors Mark Johnson, Katy Olverman, Sarah Clerk, Benita Johnson, Rick Marine, and Trisha Holmes.





Descriptions of the Activities are in the schedule. Any activities you do not wish for your child to portray in please describe below:







I do not give parental approval for my child to participate in the following activities:



______________________________________…



______________________________________…



______________________________________…



______________________________________…









YES NO



Student has permission to travel via Bus

to Camp Hebron. _____ _____





Student has permission to participate in the following

Activities provided in the schedule? _____ _____





I understand that my child will be obliged to abide by the Christian-Based Rules and by the Code of Discipline while participating in this field trip/program.



In the event of serious illness or injury to my child, I expressly consent to the administration of emergency medical care, if in the opinion of attending medical personnel, such action is advisable.



I have read this Permission Slip and understand its terms. I sign it voluntarily and with full knowledge of its significance.







Parent’s/Guardian’s Signature_______________________________…



Relationship to Minor___________________________________…



Address ________________________________________…

Street Apt. #



______________________________________…



_________________ _______________ _________

City State Zip Code





Home Telephone # ____________________



Cellular Telephone # ____________________



Work Telephone # ____________________



Alt Telephone # _______________________Does this look like a good permission slip? Are there any errors?
I think this looks very proffessional and precise. It's also very well layed out and neat.

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The only fix I would make it to take out "first" here: "May 1st we will first be meeting as usual in “The Loft.” At 4pm sharp. At 7pm we will depart to Camp Hebron."Does this look like a good permission slip? Are there any errors?
Looks great unless you are trying to pull one over on your parents :)



Well thought out and neat.Does this look like a good permission slip? Are there any errors?
Looks precise!
yes
a few errors. I edited some minor typing and grammitcal errors. you might also want to try to compact it a little bit.

your original is worded very well!



I, as Parent or Guardian, give permission for, _________________________

(Student’s First and Last Name)



To Attend:



Glasgow Church’s Annual Camp Hebron Youth Trip!!!



Event Time: Friday May 1, 2009 to Sunday May 3, 2009.

(Registration and payments must be completed and turned in by March 21, 2009.)



May 1st we will meet first, as usual, in “The Loft” at 4pm sharp. At 7pm we will depart to Camp Hebron.





1. Mode of Transportation: Glasgow’s Church busses.



2. Students will leave from: May 1, 2009 at 7:00 p.m. and arrive at Camp Hebron at 9:30 p.m.



3. Students will return: May 3, 2009 at 10:30 p.m. at the Glasgow Church parking lot.



4. Chaperones in Charge: Youth director: Cindy Marx. Associate youth director: Danielle Rabella. Counselors: Mark Johnson, Katy Olverman, Sarah Clerk, Benita Johnson, Rick Marine, and Trisha Holmes.





Descriptions of the activities are in the schedule. Any activities you do not wish for your child to participate in please describe below:



I do not give parental approval for my child to participate in the following activities:



______________________________________…



______________________________________…



______________________________________…



______________________________________…









YES NO



Student has permission to travel via Bus

to Camp Hebron. _____ _____





Student has permission to participate in the following

Activities provided in the schedule? _____ _____





I understand that my child will be obliged to abide by the Christian-Based Rules and by the Code of Discipline while participating in this field trip/program.



In the event of serious illness or injury to my child, I expressly consent to the administration of emergency medical care, if in the opinion of attending medical personnel, such action is advisable.



I have read this Permission Slip and understand its terms. I sign it voluntarily and with full knowledge of its significance.







Parent’s/Guardian’s Signature_______________________________…



Relationship to Minor___________________________________…



Address ________________________________________…

Street Apt. #



______________________________________…



_________________ _______________ _________

City State Zip Code





Home Telephone # ____________________



Cellular Telephone # ____________________



Work Telephone # ____________________



Alt Telephone # _______________________

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