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Hi,



I wrote this letter for the President Barack Obama but I am Italian and I am not sure if is an english perfect, can you correct me this letter? I am afraid that I made errors



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My email is k303@hotmail.it









Dear President Barack Obama,



I am Mario rossi, an Italian student. I am 24 years old.



I wrote this letter because I am happy if you can read my thesis that I made for my degree (graduation).



I graduated on 15 February of 2011 at “University of Political Sciences at the Università degli Studi della Tuscia in the city of Viterbo, in Italy.



Address of my studies: Tecniche della Comunicazione e della Web Economy – Comunication Techniques and the Web Economy.



The title of the thesis is : “La riforma sanitaria americana secondo Barack Obama: l'impatto economico” - “The American Health Care Reform sponsored by Barack Obama: the economic impact”



Matter of the thesis: Economic policy.



The work is divided into three chapters with also a paragraph, in English language of summary and conclusions of the thesis.

I decided to choose this argument because it was an historic event for all Americans and it evoked a great interest for me.

I made researches in American web sites like the White House, the Congressional Budget Office, etc.

I am very happy if you read the thesis, I know, you don't have the time, but try for me. I enclose (annex) a copy of my thesis in the CD.





Thank you very much.



Your Sincerely.



Valerio Caporossi



My contacts and informations:



Email: k303@hotmail.it

Phone number: +39 0766/556789

Mobile phone: +39 3257689780



Name and Surname: Mario rossi

Address: Via Roma 40

Zip Code: 01100

City: Viterbo

Country: ItalyCorrect me this letter help me?
Dear President Barack Obama,



I am Mario rossi, an Italian student. I am 24 years old.



I am writing this letter to ask you if you would be so kind as to read the thesis that I wrote for my degree.



I graduated on February 15, 2011 from the College of Political Sciences at the Università degli Studi della Tuscia in the city of Viterbo, Italy.



My major was: Tecniche della Comunicazione e della Web Economy – Comunication Techniques and the Web Economy.



The title of my thesis is “La riforma sanitaria americana secondo Barack Obama: l'impatto economico” - “The American Health Care Reform sponsored by Barack Obama: the Economic Impact”



The subject of the thesis is economic policy.



The work is divided into three chapters with an English language summary and conclusions.

I decided to choose this argument because it was an historic event for all Americans and it evoked great interest in me.

I did research on American web sites like those of the White House, the Congressional Budget Office, etc.

I would be very happy if you read my thesis. I know you usually don't have much time for this, but I ask you to make an exception in this case. I enclose (annex) a copy of my thesis in the CD.





Thank you very much.



Yours Sincerely,Correct me this letter help me?
credo sia perfetta e senza errori :):)